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Submitted: February 11
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Resolution: 5184×3456
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~draumfoto Feb 28, 2013 Hobbyist Photographer

lovely and nostalgic still life! however, the composition seems kinda tight and cramped to me. as ~JCRiddler above said, it could use a bit more widening and space. maybe moving the camera a bit to the left of the composition?

~JCRiddler Feb 17, 2013 Professional General Artist

I feel like the dynamic of the composition could be enhanced by making the dimensions less 6x4 and more 16x9 (but that mostly just a preference) and a little more off center (say putting the lens of the camera a little more to the left). But I love the focus, and DOF and the classic feel the lighting & added subject (key, pearls & doily/fabric).